Thursday, March 1, 2012

Bwa-ha-ha-ha! I'm laghing my ass off!

F.Y.I. i can be a huge perv. at times and i can write some pretty detailed sex scenes in stories and then after one of my friends read it she "attempted" to write one herself and this is how it turned out.
      "Drew-(kisses her neck moving his hands skillfully down her shirt unbuttoning it.)
Mystery-I'm not sure we should be doing this(thinks 'please let him understand')
Drew-(pulls away) Don't worry i'll be gentle(keeps kissing her)
Mystery-(Goes limb) Ok(lifts her cammy and takes it off.)
Drew- for a thirteen year old you sure are hot(bites into her neck)
Mystery- So are we gona do it here.(lets him pull off her skirt.)
Drew- Yeah(unhooks her bra)
Mystery-(closes her eyes) be gentle(feels him thrust into her roughly) Oww!
Drew-(ignores her)
Mystery-(in overwhelming pain think 'make this end please)
Drew- ignores her.
Mystery-(still crying passes out0
Drew- 9gets off her and leaves)"
                O.M.G.! Not only do the details suck balls! But it went from sex scene to rape scene half way through, am i right? Just to clarify, no way in hell i wrote that piece. My friend wrote that and she knows she did a horrible job on it that's why she's letting bad mouth it on the internet. In another one of her sex scene attempts the moment the guy stuck his dick up the girl's pussy he came. She made the guy pre-ejaculate! O.M.G. Well that's about it for now,ha ha ha(still cracking up). Until next time.

1 comment:

  1. LOL. Would have been a turn on with more detail and w/o rape. Paha.

    maybeyoushouldshareoneofyourown

    xP

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